Hai guys, DerpyHoovzzz here. A couple of months ago in school we were learning about Fantasy/Myth stories in Language Arts. We had a project to make our own version of a Cinderella story, and I chose to make mine MLP based. We also created a book trailer for our story/ a Cinderella book, so I'm wondering and I'm asking for your guys' opinion, should I make my Cinderella story better and post it here chapter by chapter? Please leave your opinions in the comments, I'll check the comments on July 23 and I'll announce if I shall or shall not. If you want to learn more about my story I'll tell you a little bit about it now. It's different from a normal Cinderella story and a little bit longer (Its about 20 pages.) I'll tell you the characters now c:


Cinderella-Twilight Sparkle


Stepsisters-Trixie and Diamond Tiara

Stepsisters friends (I added more characters c:) - Rarity and Silver Spoon

Godmothers- Cadence, Luna, and Celestia

Cinderella's friends- Cutiemark Crusaders (excluding Babs Seed) , Derpy Hooves, Spike, and all other of the Mane 6's pets

Prince Charming- Blueblood (I couldnt think of anyone else!!!)

Godtree (Same as Godmother but has awsome tree powers) - Fluttershy

Thats about all of the characters that have a big role in the story. I do have the rest of the Mane 6 but they're more of background characters, Applejack is the pastry chef (Like when she made apple pastries in At The Gala episode) , Pinkie Pie is the Host, and Rainbow Dash is the entertainment (She's in the Wonderbolts) Oh, I forgot to mention, the title of the story is At The Gala. So, what do you guys think so far? Want to read it? If so, please comment your opinions c: