Interesting what if for Rainbow Dash

I wrote this story on an interesting twist with Rainbow Dash teaching Scootaloo to fly. It focuses on Scoot final Flying but with end help of someone else and how it affects Dash

http://gojira012.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Dragons-Scootaloo-takes-Flight-440627637?q=gallery%3AGojira012&qo=1