Alright this is for my fanfic can you guys give me some good critisim.........actual song is called Girl Like That by Every Avenue and its a good idea to listen to the song while looking at this. heres a link to the actual song
What can you do with a mare like that?
Taking everything giving nothing back
Stuck between her wings when she sets her trap
What can you do with a mare like that?
She's knows what she's doing
Standing there with her headphones in
A skinny saddle and a cutie mark
Her smile makes me wonder where she's been
I would make a move if I thought there was a chance she'd let me in
What can you do with a mare like that?
Taking everything giving nothing back
Stuck between her wings when she sets her trap
What can you do with a mare like that?
I can't wait for the weekend
Downtown where we all sneak in
Everybody's trying to get some
She takes a drink and then she laughs at them
I can't coast gotta move slow (?)
Watching her as she works the room
Does she see me? Does she know
I Wear my confidence like a costume?
I would make a move if I thought there was a chance she'd let me in
What can you do with a mare like that?
Taking everything giving nothing back
Stuck between her wings when she sets her trap
What can you do with a mare like that?
It's like a curse that's she's put on me
Sweaty hooves, shaking knees
Tell her that I want her to move too fast.
That's what you do with a mare like that.
A mare like that.
A mare like that.
I think it could be me she's looking at
And that's a smile I see
So now I know that I can make a move
'cause I think there's a chance she'll let me in.
What can you do with a mare like that?
Taking everything giving nothing back
Stuck between her wings when she sets her trap
What can you do with a mare like that?
It's like a curse that's she's put on me
Sweaty hooves, shaking knees
Tell her that I want her to move too fast.
That's what you do with a mare like that.
That's what you do with a mare like that.
A mare like that.
A mare like that.