Okay, I just made this OC and I would like your opinion: Do you like the rough sketch or colored version better? What can I do to improve? Reptile already told me I need to work on shading. All critiques/advice/comments are welcome.

FANMADE Silverbolt Firefly Blue

Which do you prefer?

The poll was created at 15:41 on May 24, 2014, and so far 8 people voted.

(For those wanting a backstory: Firefly Blue is a slightly eccentric inventor Pegasus. While his inventions are usually harmless failures, he does manage to make the occasional very useful - or incredibly destructive - device. He prefers to stay away from people; a slight stammer and wild ideas don't usually make social interactions very easy.)

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